Friday Flash 55: Wipeout

30 Apr

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It’s common wisdom — never ask for signs.
But why? A sign could reveal the right choice.
Concentrate on writing or concentrate on my business?
I wanted a bold, clear sign.
But 1600 gallons of water into the business?
I think I could have got it with a smaller hint —
a post-it instead of a billboard.


Okay, this wasn’t fiction, but I wish it was. Wait. No, no. I don’t wish anything! I take that back! Anyone else ever had a wish go wrong in a big way? See what other Friday Flash 55 participants wrote about.

Today is the last day to get your name in for the Earth Day giveaway. I’ll announce the winner tomorrow.

Note: The insurance claim is all wrapped up.  I turn in the keys to my old shop today and I’m all moved in to my new place. I’m working on an exciting new story with Orchid Games, so it’s all good.


7 Responses to “Friday Flash 55: Wipeout”

  1. John April 30, 2010 at 8:44 am #

    Careful what you wish for… Gone for a poem this week based on the Etheree form created about twenty years ago by an Arkansas poet named Etheree Taylor Armstrong It normally consists of ten lines of unmetered and unrhymed verse, the first line having one syllable, each succeeding line adding a syllable. I added an extra row for the word count and the punch line. See what I mean here.

  2. brian April 30, 2010 at 10:11 am #

    yeah…when life wants to get your attention it does not hold back…lol. nice 55…

    mine is up…

  3. Alice Audrey April 30, 2010 at 11:24 am #

    Yeah, I’ve had plenty of wishes go very, very wrong. It’s enough to make a body wish to quit wishing.

  4. Monkey Man April 30, 2010 at 5:08 pm #

    Flood? Yikes, that can’t be god. Sounds like it is turning out okay though. My 55 is HERE.

  5. Ji April 30, 2010 at 7:45 pm #

    excellent 55.

  6. G-Man April 30, 2010 at 11:37 pm #

    Nara Malone…
    The best inspiration come from real life!
    Excellent 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for sharing your excitement.
    You Rock The Planet!
    Thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End!

  7. one more believer May 1, 2010 at 6:37 pm #

    subtlety works here… i will think again before i ask for a sign…

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