Friday 55: Ashes #flashfiction

16 Jul

Heart Aflame

Heart Aflame by BozDoz on Flickr photo sharing

“Focus,” he said, tugging the rope.

But how? Her mind ran in circles, this way and that, yapping like a little dog.

He layered pleasure and pain, smothering thoughts with an escalating craving for Him, consuming her in flames, until nothing remained but a soft floating feeling – ashes of who she had been, landing.

This post is in response to G-Man’s Friday Flash 55. Participants tell a story in 55 words. See what other participants wrote here.

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7 Responses to “Friday 55: Ashes #flashfiction”

  1. brian July 16, 2010 at 7:31 am #

    whew. smoking 55. great imagerys and i felt every word…smiles.

  2. Patti July 16, 2010 at 12:07 pm #

    Wow. I’m not sure just what’s happening. The rope and the pain made me wonder. But overall, pretty hot.

  3. Eric Alder July 16, 2010 at 12:26 pm #

    “Her mind ran in circles, this way and that, yapping like a little dog.”

    Great imagery there! I can just see the little yapper!

  4. Monkey Man July 16, 2010 at 2:07 pm #

    Steamy stuff and a great 55. My 55 is HERE .

  5. G-Man July 16, 2010 at 5:14 pm #

    No safe word?
    Hmmmmm
    Sweet Bondage…Nara Malone..This ROCKED!
    Excellent 55 My Friend.
    What a treasure you are to Fridays…WOW!
    Thank You so much for the sizzle!
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End…G

  6. Nara Malone July 19, 2010 at 4:57 pm #

    Thank you all for dropping by. I usually try to catch you at your websites, rather than in comments here, but I have been berated for letting my commenters appear to be unanswered, so I will try to keep up at both ends.

    @G-Man No safe words needed between them I think. I love Fridays with the Flash 55 crowd.

  7. anthonynorth July 20, 2010 at 4:08 am #

    This was one is so deep, full of passion, with a fine sprinkling of the surreal.

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