Friday Flash 55: Dumped

3 Sep

megan running down bergis road - DSC00065

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At his age the sight of me in shorts shouldn’t get him so excited.
He licks my knees.
“No way.”
He licks my toes.
“It’s too early.”
His eyes adore me.
I get my running shoes.
I’m dumped at the front gate for the first big-eyed doe to flick her tail at him.

This post is part of G-Mans Friday Flash 55. Drop by to see what other participants wrote.

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11 Responses to “Friday Flash 55: Dumped”

  1. PattiKen September 3, 2010 at 12:18 pm #

    I hope we’re talking about your dog here. 😉
    Nice 55.

  2. anthonynorth September 3, 2010 at 1:19 pm #

    Now that’s gratitude for you 😉

  3. gospelwriter September 3, 2010 at 1:54 pm #

    love this – a moment of -huh? becomes clear, but what a great write!

  4. G-Man September 3, 2010 at 2:30 pm #

    Nara Malone….?
    People lick your toes?
    (Give me a moment)
    *sigh*
    Excuse me.. What was I saying?

    Oh yeah… Someone dumped YOU?
    What an Ass-Hole!
    Pick yourself up, and move on to the next victim.

    Loved your 55…

    LOVED IT!…Have a Kick Ass Week-End

  5. Alice Audrey September 3, 2010 at 3:13 pm #

    Woof! What a dog.

    My 55 is here.

  6. Gemma@Greyscale September 3, 2010 at 7:20 pm #

    Now that’s a dog with one thought in mind! Freedom to bolt away on a personal journey! Love the weaving of innuendo!

  7. brian September 3, 2010 at 7:51 pm #

    nice! i hope you are not talking about your dog here…lol. hot 55 nara!

  8. Talon September 4, 2010 at 12:22 am #

    Fickle dogs! But who can resist those melting eyes? Neat 55!

  9. Jannie Funster September 4, 2010 at 8:52 am #

    Dumped? He was just a stepping stone.

    There is something energetically awesome about this 55 I can’t quite put my finger on, but it works very well and makes me think of a Joni Mitchell song from For The Roses where she is “running like a white tail doe.” A song called “Still Like To See You Sometime,” I think.

    I like your 55!

  10. Christine September 4, 2010 at 1:22 pm #

    Loved the playfulness of this. Nicely done! What a dog.

  11. Jingle September 18, 2010 at 2:19 pm #

    so well done!

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