Snatched

18 May

Kiss No. 2

Snatched

She loves those first moments after a catch,
when the air is incensed,
tastes of desire.
She’s caught in the twin spotlights
of his perusal,
time frozen but for skidding hearts,
the trickle of sweat down necks,
the rise and fall of breath coming in soft pants.

Chase was given and taken,
but the taking’s not done.
A damp promise,
fragrant with passion’s spice,
invites him to strip away the last layer,
spread his feast on lush meadow grass.

But he waits for it
letting the moment draw out,
anticipating an age old sign:
a lift of chin,
a tilt of head exposing a slender neck,
the soft flutter of lashes lowering.
A silent surrender of prey to hunter.

by Jolie a character from Snatch Me by Nara Malone

This character blog was written in response to this week’s Three Word Wednesday Prompt. See what other participants wrote and learn how you can join in here.

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14 Responses to “Snatched”

  1. Anthony North May 18, 2011 at 10:56 am #

    A perfect seduction.

  2. Jae Rose May 18, 2011 at 12:00 pm #

    Primal..enticing..as a writer you snare us in..as their lips and the chase of passion ensnares them..Jae

    • naramalone May 18, 2011 at 12:33 pm #

      Thanks for stopping in Jae, glad you enjoyed.

  3. earlybird May 18, 2011 at 12:14 pm #

    I particularly like ‘fragrant with passion’s spice’ and the last line. Good use of prompts.

    • naramalone May 18, 2011 at 12:35 pm #

      Thanks for dropping in earlybird, it’s a big help to me knowing what I get right. 🙂

  4. Sheilagh Lee May 18, 2011 at 3:03 pm #

    lovely it’s very sensual and yet sweet

    • naramalone May 18, 2011 at 8:52 pm #

      Thanks Sheilagh, glad you could see that sweet aspect.

  5. Laurie Kolp May 18, 2011 at 7:34 pm #

    Sizzlin’ hot… wonderful seduction.

  6. Jess May 18, 2011 at 7:47 pm #

    ‘twin spotlights/ of perusal’ is a wonderful line, so creative and perfect imagery

    • naramalone May 18, 2011 at 8:54 pm #

      Thanks Jess, took me awhile to come up with that.

  7. trisha May 19, 2011 at 3:24 am #

    beautifully written piece.

    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/05/19/incensed-for-3ww/

  8. mindlovemisery May 22, 2011 at 6:47 am #

    So romantic and the picture is so sweet =)

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