Twice the Burn

5 Jul

Burn
Photograph: Burn by accent on eclectic, on Flickr photo sharing

Two at once
One all heart,
The other all mind

Two sets of teeth to tug and tease
Four hands fanning the flames
Resistance squashed between two rebel hearts

Moonlight spilling over bare limbs
Shadows entwined in an undulating dance
Our breaths a watery song, syncing

You need this says the first
You want this says the second
You are loved they whisper together

I think I shouldn’t
One should fill my needs
But two, two are sooo sweet

Two hot tongues
Twenty clever fingers
Twenty sticky fingers

How can I
How can we
How can I not

We go down
Cool sheets under us
Sweat slicked body on either side

Melting between them
Like a candle burning at both ends
Maybe what we have can’t last

Fine then
Use me up
Let’s go out in a glorious blaze

~Daya, a newly named character from a nameless project

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A new character jumped in to blog this. Daya is from a WIP, a Hawaiian cowboy romance. This post was written in response to the Carry On Tuesday prompt. You can go here to see what others wrote or join in the fun yourself.

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7 Responses to “Twice the Burn”

  1. Daydreamertoo July 5, 2011 at 7:31 pm #

    Hot hot HOTTTTTTT…. Very seductive and sensual! Nicely written.

    • naramalone July 7, 2011 at 10:04 am #

      Thanks 🙂 Glad you enjoy the heat.

  2. becca givens July 5, 2011 at 8:29 pm #

    My, oh my!! That’s all I can say … oh my!! 🙂

    • naramalone July 7, 2011 at 10:05 am #

      Hi,Becca. Thanks for braving the heat to read and comment.

  3. Alice Audrey July 6, 2011 at 3:48 pm #

    I like her. 😀 She thinks like me.

    – Alice

    • naramalone July 7, 2011 at 10:06 am #

      I know what you mean, Alice. 😉

  4. Whitesnake July 9, 2011 at 5:00 pm #

    Yes I have been there……………and still am………;-)

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